SURPRISING MURDER
It was a dark, cold, rainy day, the town was deserted, nobody was in the street and the strong wind hit the trees of St James Park. John was walking with her umbrella without knowing where he had to go to. He was dismissed of the work just that morning and he was worried about how was going to manage to pay the car at the end of the month. He arrived to home and he entered in the lift for going up.
He entry to his house and he entered that her mother has died, the police said that was a natural died, but john didn’t believe that was a natural because his mother have only 60 years old. So he went to investigate the “murder” of his mother and he had some clue, but he couldn’t solved the case only. So he contracted a very good detective, the detective was called Michael and he had about fifty years old. He had solved a lot of cases so he was a very good detective.
In the next day, John met with the detective that he contracted in the suburbs of the city, John gave the clues that had of the died of her mother and the detective said that this wasn’t a natural died. So he started to investigated her friends and her husband. The detective achieve more clues for the case and they met with John again with the new clues. The detective said to John that he had some suspect people.
- I investigated and I have a suspect, your father killed your mother. I think that your father was drunk and killed your mother.
- No my father was in Bangkok, in a business travel. He was an important commercial that moved petrol around the world.
- So your father wasn’t the killer. I am confused, I going to continue investigating and I going to tell you the information, bye.
The detective disappeared and John went to house.
The next day, at 6:30 on the morning meanwhile John was waking up the detective knock at the door and he said that he has already resolved the case, so he opened the door. The detective said that the murderer was his father, but not exactly his father, the clue was that his father contract a professional murderer to kill his mother. In that moment John was surprise because maybe it was real but however was his father.
In the next day, the police arrested the killer and the father of John. He didn’t believe that his father was the killer, he didn’t understand why did he do that. But the murder was happened so the father of John and the professional murderer that killed his mother, they had taken to the prison. The punishment was to stay all their live in the prison. After that murder John lived very well.
Hello readers! These weeks our group (Iker, Joannes, Ibon, Manex, Imanol and me) have been working in stories. We have done different stories in this way: each member has started a story writting a paragraph and we have continued the stories writting the next paragraphs until finishing.Here I leave you my original story link and the links of the stories that I contributed to. I hope you enjoy it!
My story
B1 Iker
B2 Joannes
B3 Ibon
B4 Manex
B6 Imanol
